题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;请注意分段。
In the past year or two,a growing number of people begin loss the trust to others.A diversity of the report appears in the media,from newspapers to TV to Internet,show us that helping stranger may be made ourselves in trouble.As the result of these phonomon,a host of people said that they are fear to help others. This topic is on the lip of everyone,a wealth of people loss the trust to stranger,thanks to the fear be deception.we should take some action to maintain trust in the society.Firstly,government ought to set the law to aviod helper been cheated so that people dear to help others which stand in trouble.Besides,media could report some positive thing that can encourage people to do that things.Last but not least,we should take human's nature character into consideration and firmly believe that the good person is bigger than the bad one.Only in the three ways can maintain trust to others.