2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇表达多样请继续保持，也能较准确地使用学术词汇，作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

The term computer may by no means sound strange to most people in this day and age.Does anyone hold the same attitude towards the relationship of the computer and man?Definitely not,as to this phenomenon,opinions vary from person to person. For those who hold the opinion that computers are beneficial to our life,claim that firstly our knowledge will be well enriched and our horizons will be greatly expended.Secondly,students can gain much experience that they will never be able to get from the textbooks,which may put them on a favorable position in the future job markets.However, others maintain that it will give rise to undesirable consequences.First and foremost,playing computer is nothing but waste our precious time,and quite a few people waste time without even realizing it.Moreover,the computer plays a negative role in our life,which will have a detrimental effect on our body health. If I were forced to agree with one of the two opinions,I,doubtless,stand by the idea that we can't emphasize the importance of the computer too much.In the first place,it will enhance efficiency many times.In the second place,the computer has exert a profound influence on our life in more than one way.Given the factors I have just outlined,I strongly commit the onion that the advantages of the computer far out weight the disadvantages.