题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
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In the past year or two,a growing number of people begin loss the trust to others.A diversity of the report appears in the media,from newspapers to TV to Internet,show us that helping the stranger may be made ourselves in trouble.As the result of these phenomena,a host of people said that they are fear to help others. This topic is on the lip of everyone,a wealth of people loss the trust to stranger,thanks to the fear be deception.We should take some action to maintain trust in the society.Firstly,government ought to set the law to avoid helper to been cheated so that people dear to help others which stand in trouble.Besides,media could report some positive things that can encourage people to do that things.Last but not least,we should take human's nature character into consideration and firmly believe that the good person is larger than the bad one.Only in the three ways can maintain trust to others.