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2001年考研英语作文真题:希望工程

发布时间:2013-05-20 18:40浏览次数:2180
要求:
Directions:
  Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it. There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to
  1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,
  2) give a specific example, and
  3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. 
  You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
 本文中的图画非常简单,结合提示考生很容易理解其含义,但这张图片的意义却很深远:油灯上面的火焰是一个孩子的微笑,在黑暗中发出明亮的光芒,上面还有一句提示语“爱心是一盏灯,在越黑暗的地方越明亮。”这句话的理解关系到对整篇文章中心思想的正确理解。这句话的前半句是个比喻,后半句是一个越……越……的结构,考生应该深刻领会爱心的重要作用。本文中的提纲有三点,一是写出对于图画象征意义的理解,二是举出一个具体的事例,三是就献爱心的最好办法给出建议。另外这道题目中增加了情景语言,即:包括情景说明,提纲说明,以及图画。降低了题目的难度,考生可以结合提纲式作文、规定情景作文和图画作文的写作特点完成本文的写作。但要注意一个重要原则:英语情景说明语句,不可直接照搬,需要进行改动。尽量应用同义,近义词,相关表达,不同句式改造。例如worthy 可以替换为valuable,feelings 可以替换为 emotions,mankind 可以替换为 human being,noblest可以替换为greatest等。我们可分三段来完成本文。在第一段中不仅应描述图画,还应描述上面的那句话。在第二段中,应举一个能与图画所表达的道理相匹配的典型事例。这样的事例很多,考生可以结合自己的经历列举,如希望工程、抗洪捐款等等,也可以列举具体人物。最后一段中,考生可以提出自己的建议,这一部分难度不高,考生可以套用一些模版句型。
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评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇表达丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

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Small wonder,in judging from what is vividly depicted in the above cartoon,if we look hard enough,we can observe lucidly that it indicates that the different ideas may come from the same thing.In the picture,while trying to catch the upcoming soccer,the goal-keeper says to himself why it is so big.On the contrary,the striker simply thinks in a different way,that is why it is so small. When seeing such a big contrary on the same tournament at the same moment,I would not go that far correspondingly,probably we have no better way to appreciate the not uncommon phenomenon than by studying the follwing influential factors.It is no doubt that they are facing the very same goal and experiencing the very same moment however,the subjective views result in different impression on the same object.Many of us may still remember the story of a pony crossing the river,which we learned from the textbook in primary school.The squirrel tells him,the river is deep,and the cow tells him,the river is not deep at all.Nevertheless,in the end,he tells himself a third answer.Accordingly,it is not exaggerating to say that most of us are looking into the world with personal ideas.Subjective mental status may result in a really big difference in personal views,just like the goal-keeper and the striker in the drawing. A possible solution might be to face any situation as objectiely as possible.If we realize this in an objective way,it would be good for us to deal with what we encounter in life,especially when we are in setbacks or facing difficutlies.

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