Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Believe it or not,our daily life is greatly affected by science. Someone criticizes it for it results in more catastrophes,making our earth less friendly to live on,while someone advocate it,they believe it brings more convenient to our work,studies,entertainments... Objectively speaking,the science itself is neither good or bad,it’s the use of it that really matters. Many years ago,I think phones are much less useful compared to computers. However,with the birth of smart-phones,my attitude changed. The smart-phones changed our daily life dramatically. Walking on the street,taking buses or subways,you can see large quantities of people using their phones watching news,communicating,playing games...However,with time going by,the smart-phones spread like big fire,it brings problems. It’s more likely to cause accidents when using phones blindly,especially on street. The smart-phones do brings us a great number benefits and convenient,but using them blindly also leed to social issue. So it’s not denying that making the use of science properly and accurately is the key to make our life more convenient.