2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, “give me six hours to chop down a tree , and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe”, indicates the way to success that if someone wants to be a success, the preparation for success is more important than what you do on the way. I agree what Abraham says. In modern society, success seems to be pork which everyone is eager for. However, it is this reason that many people can’t calm down and think wisely about success and the way to it, which brings about consequences that many people are lost and they don’t know how to get to the beach of success though they have tried their best. The key is the way to success. If we don’t have a good method, how we can do something effectively and become successful more quickly. As far as I am concerned, to be successful, to begin with, a commonplace mind is very important. When people all persue something together regardless of their voice of heart, you should stop, think, and brood over what you want in actual. After carefully consideration, make your choice and stick to it in spite of the voice of outside. Secondly, working hard is necessary for you to be successful since you have found what you want. Only in this way, can success be achieved.