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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3008
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
评语:

文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。

用户练习作文:

Almost no one in china failed to notice this phenomenon that a growing number of people are enthusiastic with various kinds of certificates.Taking a look around,we can find numerous examples with ease.A common case in point that the students spend a great deal of time and energy in attending various kinds of certificate oriented training to ensure a better score. The purpose of acquiring certificates varies from individuals to individuals.For students,as the job market competition is becoming increasingly fierce,not only can a certain certificate prove their capabilities,but also will put them in favorable position in the employment market.When it comes to white collar workers,more job related certificates often guarantee greater opportunities for salary raise and promotion.What′s more,it is also an ideal way to enhance their techniques and sharpen their competitions. From my perspective,the merits of pursuing certificates are self-evident.Conversely,we should bear in mind that it is the practical skills,such as management,communication,cooperation,rather than certificates that guarantee one′s accomplishment in career.Accordingly,we might as well attach great important to both certificates and the improvement of one′s comprehensive abilities.

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