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Holle everyone,the next lesson is an English lesson in language lab. you had better arrive in the lab early two miuntes opening the class. you get to bring the nothing except your English book to enter the lab. During the lesson, listen carefully to the teacher, and don't touch the machine optionally, if you have any questions, you can ask the teacher in English after you rising your hand and the teacher calling you. finally you can copy the learning material after lesson and turn off your machine go out the lab.