题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
With the development of economic,our society has become more competitive resulting in the lack of trust.This is really pathetic,as people no longer trust each other. Human cannot be alone in the society cause we cannot do anything by ourselves no matter what we do.Everyday we need to interact with friends or communicate with strangers no matter who we are or what we do.Only if we maintaining trust with each other can we build a harmonious society .Let's take an example a man left his lottery at a shop and that lottery turned out to be very valuable but that shopkeeper returned it to that man instead of keeping it.It's really inspired. As far as I am concerned,it's a virtue to be honest to others and if everyone can behavior honestly the world must be better and better.