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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17426
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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文中衔接词丰富;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;作者词汇量比较丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误。

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With technology developing, a growing number of people are involved in the life with computers. We perfer to surf in the Internet with computer rather than communicate with friends or relatives, and we are gradually traped in the hole that everyone was isolated from each other. In the modern society, there are many people who even don't know their neighbors' name. It's obvious that computer change our life in a deep degree, and it's a mixed blessing. In the one hand, we are more easily to get informations from computers, which is pretty content i nour life; but in another hand, we are more and more isolated from the society. However, we are born to be wrapped by society. The disadvantages of cimputers really cut our ability of communicating others down. In my opinion, the relationship between human and computer is conflicated, both hostile and friendly. What we should to is to avoid being addicated to computers.

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