Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者词汇基础扎实;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Believe it or not, our daily life is greatly affected by science. Someone criticizes it for it results in more catastrophes, making our earth less friendly to live on, while someone advocates it, believing it brings more convenient to our work, studies, entertainments. .. Objectively speaking, the science itself is neither good nor bad, it's the use of it that really matters. Many years ago, I thought that phones are much less useful compared to computers. However, with the birth of smart-phones, my attitude changed. The smart-phones changed our daily life dramatically. Walking on the street, taking buses or subways, you can see large quantities of people using their phones watching news, communicating, playing games. .. However, with time going by, the smart-phones spread like big fire, they bring plenty of problems. It's more likely to cause accidents when using phones blindly, especially on street. The smart-phones do brings us many benefits, but using them blindly also leed to social issue. So it's not denying that making the use of science properly and accurately is the key to make our life more convenient.