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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Believe it or not, our daily life is greatly affected by science. Someone criticizes it for it results in more catastrophes, making our earth less friendly to live on, while someone advocates it, believing it brings more convenient to our work, studies, entertainments. .. Objectively speaking, the science itself is neither good nor bad, it's the use of it that really matters. Many years ago, I thought that phones are much less useful compared to computers. However, with the birth of smart-phones, my attitude changed. The smart-phones changed our daily life dramatically. Walking on the street, taking buses or subways, you can see large quantities of people using their phones watching news, communicating, playing games. .. However, with time going by, the smart-phones spread like big fire, they bring plenty of problems. It's more likely to cause accidents when using phones blindly, especially on street. The smart-phones do brings us many benefits, but using them blindly also leed to social issue. So it's not denying that making the use of science properly and accurately is the key to make our life more convenient.

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