2000年1月英语四级作文真题:解决上大学的费用

熟练使用了一些长难句；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；文中词汇丰富度和学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有较多拼写错误；请注意分段。

nowadays, more and more students have oppurtunities enter their dreamy universities,they can rely on their family to afford the expense.But there are also some students are upset how to finance the fees of colleges,but they can load the money from banks and no need interest. As for me,my parents can afford my all expense of me in the university,so i can have my all heart in my study my major knowledge.but i also will do some part time job,because it can not only earn some money but aslo can increase my job experience.