2007年12月英语六级作文真题:Digital Age

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Currently,our society goes hand in hand with high technology.Universally acknowledged that computer science and related engineering sciences subjects have prompted the progress of production capabilities,especially digital electric products smart phone,third generation cellphone,disposable laptop such those products bring a new significant industrial revolution to our world above all let us learn more details about how digital products change our lifes firstly,teachers do not use old model devices to teach students learn their courses presently,teachers prefer to use advanced projector instead od traditional equipment.secondly,mordern company all tend to equipt Ipad instead of traditional computers.Ipad is more convinence It also enable us to deal with business anywhere from above two phenomenens we can fnd digital products have simplified our life make people work more efficiency,meanwhile various impossible things that are seemed impossible to archieved in previous age also could be done in digital age