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新东方托福高分作文:应该从外在判断一个人吗?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:36浏览次数:2928
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题目要求:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

题目分析:

表明只能“部分同意”的立场。然后写两大段,举若干个例子。很多的情况下,确实不应该根据外表判断一个人。但也有一些情况下,必须根据外表判断。比如,导演选择演员;招聘零售柜台店员等等。
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中词汇表达用的较灵活,同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。

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Do you agree or disagree ,the way a person dressed is a good indication of his/her personality or character. Dressing style is an external appearance and is easily observed by others. Many people tend to figure out a person's internal character through what kind of clothes he or she wears. However, I cannot agree with this statement. The way a person dressed is not an indication of his or her personality or character , at least is not a good one. First, most people dress in a same or similar style , making it hard to tell exactly what character they have on their own. When you go to a school ,a company, or a factory, people there all wear the same uniforms and there is no difference. Even when you walk on the street, people around you mostly wear common clothes similarly .Maybe they just think it is comfortable and usual to wear in such kind style and it usually do not indicate their character. Thus , dressing styles cannot show what the peroson is like. Furthurmore, even though some characters can be exploited by dressing styles sometimes, we are still not able to get a full picture of his or her personalities. A person wearing up-to-date clothes may be considered vogue and so he is. While if he is passionate , what kind of clothes shold he wear to show he is really full of passion? The best answer is wearing nothing and it is an impossible. In this way , it is not hard to conclude that when dressing styles is an indication of one's characters in some circumstances ,it is not a good one. In general, by observing the ways a person dressed we are hard to get to know his character since most people's styles are not distinct and also many personalities will not be revealed by clothed. Maybe we can know a person well by having a long relationship with him or her, but not by analyzing his or her dressing styles. Thus I disagree with the statement.

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