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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46291
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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The information introduced vividly by the chart that the more degree you have the more weekly earnings you will earn.Moreover,with a higher degree would face a less unemployment rate. Nowadays,increasing people think that we are wasting our time when we in school and gain knowledge from teachers and books.More and more people select drop out of school for create their own career.However,when we see the form,we can recognize that we are wrong.Doctoral degree and professional degree earn more salary than others. In my mind, the effort we paid for study is not wasting,and we can reward from it.When we gain a higher degree,we can have more confidence and ability to meet with the society.To conclude,the more you effort,the more education will pay for you.

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