2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Education Pays According to the figures show in the graph,we can see that the people having higher degree can earn more income than those who have little education background.The report proves the sigficance of the education. People have various views to education .Some people think it will waste their time and money,so they would not pay more it.Most people think it is important to their future development.They pay more energy in the education to get higher degree. As far as I am concerned,educaton benefits for us and our society.Just as the saything goes,"koowledge is power".So we should try our best to get higher degree.