Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章层次较为清晰;文中学术词汇的使用比较灵活,但有个别拼写错误。
From the cartoon,we can see that a student is busy with fighting for various kinds of certificates to cater the appetite of unknown employers.Exaggerated as it is,it is not an unusual view on campus. Two reasons may account for this phenomenon.Primarily,a growing number of employers believe that the more certificates you possess,the more capable you are,which can be the driver of this epidemic.Additionally,it is the future with unknown and indeterminacy that makes students confused.Consequently,they can do nothing but fight for certificates to enrich their college life. In my perspective,it is unwise to sacrific our presious time to get such certificates which we are not interested in.What we college students should do is to equite ourselves with knowledges in order to make us more creativitive.Certificates,however,are indispensable for job hunting,but we also need to enhance our integrated qualities.Only when we become diversified talents can we achieve our career.