2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

With the development of society,we can see more and more goods packed with unnecessary beautiful boxes or papers.We call this phenomenon that goods on excessive packaging. With the completion among companies,increasing firms appeal customs by beautify their goods.Many businessmen believe that most of people choose a good by the first sight.Therefore,they equip their goods with special pack. In my mind,almost every customer select thing by it contain.So,companies had better to strength things' quality.When it comes to success,the most significant thing is great contain.