2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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my views on online shopping with the days going on and the internet developing ,online oshopping has becoming more and more popular ,there are many reason can tell us why people change their old way to buy goods ,first ,the most imporant advantage is the cheap price ,people will choose the cheaper one undoubtfuly when thy faced the same thing .second,we don't have to tolerate the crowd jas just for chase a coat .what's more ,you can find a large amount of clothes on your computer screen so that you could look for the best one .howere,on the other hand ,it also exists some promblem which needs to be change .for example,low quality goods have becoming ordinary through the market .also,online shopper's quality and dignity is worth to be consider. all in all,online shopping still increase our life quality and make our buying easliy.