2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education Pays According to the figures show in the graph,we can see that the people who have higher degree can earn more income than those who have little educational background.The report proves the significance of the education. People have various views to education.Some people think it will waste their time and money,so they would not pay more it.Most people think it is important to their development.They pay more energy in the education to get higher degree. As far as I am concerned,education benefits for us and our society.we should firmly believe that our pays to education will take rewards for us.Just as the saying goes,"knowledge is power".So we should try our best to get higher degree.