2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮。

　　The difference between a man who succeeds and one who does not lies only in the way each takes preparation. "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first hour sharpening the axe." Such is the famous remark by Abraham Lincoln. This view has been shared now by more and more people. 　　These, however, come down to the following aspects. In the first place, when an opportunity comes, it brings a promise but never realizes it on its own. Thus, the successful person always makes adequate preparations to meet opportunity when it comes. And in the second place, if you want to achieve something or intent to fulfill one of your ambitions, you must work hard, make effects and get prepared. Otherwise, you will take no advantage of opportunity when it comes to visit you. In the end, no one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for ordinary people to master complex situations and success without adequate preparations. 　　To sum up, there are various ways of success for everyone in our society, but only those who are prepared adequately can make use of them to achieve the purpose.