2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

　　　　A smile is a small gesture with a powerful impact. As a golden rule goes that "A smile is the shortest distance between two people", it means that kindness can bring any two individuals together. In interpersonal communication, a smile plays, to a great degree, a fundamental role. It can be summed up in the following aspects. 　　　For one thing, a smile provides the material basis for interpersonal communication. It is more than just an facial expression, it is a means of expression as well as a vehicle for communication and as such become a powerful tool for reaching other human bings. For another, a smile is a general body language around the world. Therefore, even though two persons come from two different places with two different languages, this community has never ceased to remind us that a smile is the same in every language. And what’s more, in the majority of the cultural context, we have come to expect likable, approachable people to smile when we meet them. If you smile at another person, you're no longer just another stranger. 　　　In conclusion,that respect for others, the smiling faces of both sides smile treat people and so on, at any time and any person exchanges, are an indispensable and important criteria. Thus, when you follow the golden rule, you open the door to the inner world of people.