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My name is LiMing,a student from the Jiangsu high school. I'm a patient boy with friendly attitude. I want to apply for the position of the English transtantor volunteer .I have a good command of English,and i was ready to help others.One thing i forgot to say was that i'll contribute my life to what i like to do. Thank you for your consideration to employed me.