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Nowadays, many universities aim at a high university ranking, and work hard for the goal. High university ranking is not just a brand, and it becomes a tool to beam a university. In my opinion, university ranking is nothing, below is my reasons. First, a university is good or bad, the result can not be attained by its university ranking. There are so many influence factors decide the result, it is hard to use a just method attain the ranking of a university. This way also may product a bad custom that universities may close their eyes for a higher ranking. Second, university ranking cause bad influence to many students, however, it is not its mind. In our society, there are so much injustice, it is caused by this way. How to judge a student? It is very sad to say there are many company use university ranking as the judgment standard. We should know that god is just, everybody is different, does it right to judge a student just through university ranking? The reality tells us , always, a student who come from a high ranking university is not better than a student that come from a low ranking university. In a word, I hold my idea that university ranking has any value.
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