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In China,-- have gained great popularity among Chinese people. However, -- have caused much controversy. Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotinal concern, we can find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer B. From my own perspective, it is more adviserble to chose A rather than B. My arguements for this point are listed as follows. The main reason for my propensity for A is that... For instance,....Another reason can be seen by everyone is that...For example,...The arguement I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because... In summary, ...So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A
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