2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

How many people would succeed in the same class?And why are so difference in the same class?The same teachers and the same teaching method that some students fail to go to university,but others gain good achievement.Why are they fortune so distinct.Just because some of they never give up,they have the strong will.That's what the important guarantee of successful. And then,the finish of great mission that person of the strong will could to do it.No matter ancient or today,in spite of international or home,all can't do it without the strong will. The same with us,as a student that eventually never become a talent if no study hard.We have to insist in our dream and finish it one day.Insist on do something maybe fail,howere if we do not insist that must be fail.