2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，不过文中词汇表达贫乏；但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Nowadays,the computer and man's connection has become more and more close.The man can't leave the computer now.So this issue has aroused great concern among the people. Some people think that is not a good phenomenon.People shouldn't rely on the computer.