2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Today more and more people love buy something on online,in my views, i think , this thing have advantages also have disadvantages .we can save our times to do more things that we like to do .most girl likes shopping ,but now , we can shopping on internet ,it is so convent, but the disadvantage are we can not know the quality about the things.