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新东方托福高分作文:应该从外在判断一个人吗?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:36浏览次数:2936
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题目要求:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

题目分析:

表明只能“部分同意”的立场。然后写两大段,举若干个例子。很多的情况下,确实不应该根据外表判断一个人。但也有一些情况下,必须根据外表判断。比如,导演选择演员;招聘零售柜台店员等等。
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作者词汇基础扎实;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩。

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It's not uncommon that many people often judge a person by the face, figure and dressing. But as for me, external appearance is just only one indication of a person's personality. Other indications such as intelligence, integrity and perseverance are so important that we cannot overstate them. Admittedly, a good-looking appearance usually create a great first impression, especially among the strange. For example, a girl makes a friend On Internet, but she never meet him. One day, the boy wish to have a date with her in a Chinese restaurant. and the girl is hesitating to go or not. Then, she requires the boy to open the webcam to make a video chat to determine whether to go or not. Finally, she decides to go and is my girlfriend now. The reason why she goes to the date is that my external appearance attracts her. Thus, it's the external appearance that helps me have a succeed date. However, it's absolutely unreliable to judge a person only depending on external appearance, we also need to pay attention to the internal character. To begin with, nowadays more and more people choose plastic surgery technology to make them have a good-looking, some even make them resemble famous stars, which results in tremendous people have a similar look. There is a news reports that a woman, who receives a face-lifting to make her look like Bingbing Fan-a Chinese famous star, was refused to by an airplane as her face is inconsistent with the image of her ID card. For this, how can you assume that you can judge a person by external appearance. Further, people's personality is mostly reflected by their inter character rather than external appearance. Common sense tells us that people who have qualities like intelligence, integrity, ambition and perseverance are fated to success. But people who have a good-looking just have possibilities to arrive a remarkable achievement. Therefore, there is nothing wrong to judge a person by external appearance. the inter character, though, is the better indication to evaluate a person.

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