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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33541
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

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Saving money Nowadays,more and more parents give their children too much money.how to use it properly is very imporant,opinions vary from person to person. I think we should make good use of the money in properly way. fistly,we have to saving money,don't waste money.before we spend the money in what we want to,we must consider it over and over again.in this way can we save money. secondly,

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