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Saving money Nowadays,more and more parents give their children too much money.how to use it properly is very imporant,opinions vary from person to person. I think we should make good use of the money in properly way. fistly,we have to saving money,don't waste money.before we spend the money in what we want to,we must consider it over and over again.in this way can we save money. secondly,