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Saving money Nowadays,more and more parents give their children too much money.how to use it properly is very imporant,opinions vary from person to person. I think we should make good use of the money in properly way. fistly,we have to saving money,don't waste money.before we spend the money in what we want to,we must consider it over and over again.in this way can we save money. secondly,we should make good use of the money,we can use it to buy books that we can learn knowlege from it.or we can do some significant things.such as,when our parents' birthday is coming, we can buy some gifts for them,and they must be happy. As far as I am concerned,I beleve that we shuold saving money,never waste it, The best way is to use it properly.Only in this way can we make our life more wonderful.
