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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。
Dream is the beacon,illuminating our future. Dream is the navigator,leading us to a bright path. Chinese dream,which is consisted of every Chinese dreams,is rooted in every Chinese. China is on an abrupt rise,we,the Chinese,should have ambitious dreams.Shouldering our nation’s responsibility is our duty. Take Yuan Longping for an example,he is a classic who has an ambitious dream,with his hard work and determination,he realized his dream,and the dream that every Chinese shares. Do.Yuan was born is a poor age,seeing millions of people starved to death,he made up his mind to develope super hybrid rice,which enable the Chinese eat fully. Having received a high education,he began his research. Occupied in experimenting in field,he was like a “real” farmer closed to nature. Ultimately,he made his dream come true. Chinese dream is a dream making our nation stronger,enabling every Chinese fulfill their individual dreams.
