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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3008
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题目 The Way to Success
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1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加。

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As is known to all,good habits can pave our way to success.Taking a look around,it is not hard to find some examples with ease,a common case in point is that a student,who have a good habit in ranging his time in studying,playing and rest,would reach a better score in exams,because good habits can resist temptation which are from others.Accordingly,it is time to us to raise good habit and to refuse the temptation. Good habits can result from refusing temptation and are beneficial for the growth of us.Initially,with the development of modern technology and artificial intelligence,there are increasingly temptation for people.So,keeping good habits,not only can prevent us spending a large amount of time in watching TV,playing video games and surfing on the net,but also can make us to take better use of time to studying and master more skills,which will help us to success and become a more versatile person.Moreover,when you keep good habits,such as never having a smoke and drinking,sleeping and standing up early,and usually eating health food,you will become more and more health,wealth,mental and have good body shape,that will promote you to success with ease. Given the striking factors I have just outlined,I strongly recommend people to keep good habits,only in this way can we grow happiness and achieve great success.

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