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The china dream has become the hottest topic after our president Xi jinking said in his first public speech in the 18th Party Congress. So what is china dream? People's views on that vary from a person to person. As far as I am concerned, the china dream has a specific meaning. It includes the renewal of our chinese nation and the aspirations of the chinese people for a good standard of living. Maybe there is a long way to go to fulfill that dreams. However, I think, the most significant thing to realize that dream is to make everyone's dream accomplished. Imaging that if everyone realize his dream, there will be more elites in our country. Obviously, they must be excellent, thus making them contribute to our country better. As a result, our country is on the way to flourishing. On top of that, I think we also can't deny the fact that the people's dream can't be fulfilled without a stronger nation. What's more, only our government provide us better education, stable jobs, great social security, better medical and healthcare can we realize our dream eventually. In conclusion, the whole nation's dream and the individual's dream are tied up together. So I believe that only everyone's dream be accomplished can the china dream be realized.
