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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；可适当增加从句使用，注意极个别句子错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Dream is the beacon,illuminating our future. Dream is the navigator,leading us to a bright path. As far as I am concerned,the Chinese dream is shared by the Chinese. Thus,the Chinese should spare no effort to realize it. Take Yuan Longping for example,he is a classic who has an ambitious dream,with his hard work and determination,he realized his dream.Do.Yuan was born is a poor age,seeing millions of people starved to death,as a result,he made up his mind to develop super hybrid rice,which enable the Chinese eat fully. Having received a high education,he began his research. Occupied in experimenting in the fields,he was like a “real” farmer closed to nature. Ultimately,he made his dream come true. In brief,the Chinese dream is a dream making our nation stronger,enabling every Chinese fulfill their individual dreams.
