2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Creating a Green Campus In recently, It is important to creat a Green Campus. It is environment that play a role in our life.Therefore, we should try our best to creat a Green Campus. There is no doubt that the Green Campus means to a good environment.However, creating a Green Campus not only keep good environment but also takes good school culture.In other words, leader should pay attention to improve the student's lever of polity and knowledge. In addition, people should take highly cautious to creating a Green Campus. When it comes to the topic about creating a Green Campus, as far as i am concerned, in order to get rid of creating a Green Campus, we should takes more activites about creating a Green Campus.Such as planting trees, have a picnic. Taking som activities to appearing the nature.