Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;能够简单运用一些从句;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。
Dream is the beacon, illuminating our future. Dream is the navigator, leading us to a bright path. As far as I am concerned, the Chinese dream is shared by the Chinese.Thus, the Chinese should spare no effort to realize it. As we all know that Yuan Longping is a great figure, what's more he is also a classic who has an ambitious dream, with his hard work and determination, he realized his dream. Do. Yuan was born is a poor age, seeing millions of people starved to death, as a result, he made up his mind to develop super hybrid rice, which enable the Chinese eat fully. Having received a high education, he began his research. Occupied in experimenting in the fields, he was like a "real " farmer closed to nature. Ultimately, he made his dream come true. In brief, the Chinese dream is a dream making our nation stronger, enabling every Chinese fulfill their individual dreams.