2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

Dream is the beacon,illuminating our future. Dream is the navigator,leading us to a bright path. As far as I am concerned,the Chinese dream is shared by the Chinese. Thus,the Chinese should spare no effort to realize it. As we all know that Yuan Longping is a great figure,what’s more,he is a classic who has an ambitious dream,as well. With his hard work and determination,he realized his dream.Do.Yuan was born is a poor age,seeing millions of people starved to death,as a result,he made up his mind to develop super hybrid rice,which enable the Chinese eat fully. Having received a high education,he began his research. Occupied in experimenting in the fields,he was like a “real” farmer closed to nature. Ultimately,he made his dream come true. In brief,the Chinese dream is a dream making our nation stronger,enabling every Chinese fulfill their individual dreams.