2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will A strong will plays an imortant role in succeed.Wheather a person succeed or not ,it mostly depends on his will. A famous saying goes where there is a will there is a way.Only when we have a strong will can we complete the great mission.To begin with, with a strong will ,we can face and deal with difficulties bravery .And so ,we can achieve our goals easier. So do the students,if you not study hard ,you won't be successful.There is a conving example,my friend,Lily,who is a student performancing badly in study.When we were busying preparing our exams,Lily was playing computer game in room.When we were studying hard in classroom,she was shopping outside.As a result,in the final exams,our whole class passed expect her.