2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；文章层次较为清晰。

Dream no matter how fuzzy, it is always hidden in our hearts, our feelings never be quiet, until the dream become a reality As far as I am concerned,the Chinese dream is shared by the Chinese. Thus,the Chinese should spare no effort to realize it. As we all know that Yuan Longping is a great figure,what’s more,he is a classic who has an ambitious dream,as well. With his hard work and determination,he realized his dream.Do.Yuan was born is a poor age,seeing millions of people starved to death,as a result,he made up his mind to develop super hybrid rice,which enable the Chinese eat fully. Having received a high education,he began his research. Occupied in experimenting in the fields,he was like a “real” farmer closed to nature. Ultimately,he made his dream come true. In brief,the Chinese dream is a dream making our nation stronger,enabling every Chinese fulfill their individual dreams.