Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Currently,some students graduated from university tend to stay at home.Among these students,some of them have failed to seek a job in the market thousands of times,while others just want to be well-fed and clothed by their parents. Due to the development of the society,competitions in the job market have become increasingly fierce.Many reasons may account for this phenomenon. Primarily,The lack of competitiveness and a wrong job hunting attitude are the first factors to blame.When entering society,they have no experience,and they always aim high,wanting to get a job with decent income.Additonally, this trend is caused,to a large extent,by the huge amount of hardships in the society,such as economic recession,housing problems,which can be the stumbling blocks on their way to achieve career goals. From my perspective,the following methods may help.On the one hand,they should be down-to- earth and strive for acquiring knowledge in order to enhance their competitiveness.On the other hand,relevant legislation and policies should be carried out by the administrations to help them get through the dilemma.Only with the methods above can graduates have a promising future.