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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46093
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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Currently,some students graduated from university tend to stay at home.Among these students,some of them have failed to seek a job in the market thousands of times,while others just want to be well-fed and clothed by their parents. Due to the development of the society,competitions in the job market have become increasingly fierce.Many reasons may account for this phenomenon. Primarily,The lack of competitiveness and a wrong job hunting attitude are the first factors to blame.When entering society,they have no experience,and they always aim high,wanting to get a job with decent income.Additonally, this trend is caused,to a large extent,by the huge amount of hardships in the society,such as economic recession,housing problems,which can be the stumbling blocks on their way to achieve career goals. From my perspective,the following methods may help.On the one hand,they should be down-to- earth and strive for acquiring knowledge in order to enhance their competitiveness.On the other hand,relevant legislation and policies should be carried out by the administrations to help them get through the dilemma.Only with the methods above can graduates have a promising future.

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