2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

The tool "computer" may by no means strange to most people in this day and age.Does everyone uses it correctly?Definitely not,there are still a plenty of people use them in a wrong way. It's real disturbing that many students around me turned their computer to a game-box.Also,it seems like all the things they want to do can get through net surfing.They stay in their bed all days only with a computer,just like the guys whom take drugs. Stand by a point of the outsider's view,it's necessary to change their way to use "tool"computer.In my view,we shall use computer to deal daily works,read books,even do some shopping.Man can never be controled by computer.So,I apply everyone to keep away from games.The computer should only be used as tools.