Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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As is seen from the graph,After the Education Pays measur carried out,ascent significantly from Unemployment rate in 2011and Median weekly earnings in 2011,It can be observed easily that the Unemployment rate from Less than high school diploma to Doctoral degree is decreased and the Median Weekly earnings is increased so,we cannot emphasize the importance of Education pays.there are many reasons responsible for this,for one thing,By devoloping education,it can decrease unemployment rates.for another thing,an advantage of carry the education is that the society will more and more progress and beautiful