题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
It is crucial for us to maintain trust. Since trust is one of the characters in our life, it exerts an tremendous importance to us. Not only should we believe others or ourselves, but also keep on maintaining trust. A majority of the individuals take the attitude that they can't believe others even keeping on trusting when others always cheated them. They hold the point that they deceivers endlessly take advantage of our trust and cheat us over and over. However, on the contrary, an army of positive people frown on it. They harbor the idea that it is trust that make people can get along in peace. Given the fact that the public morals should be in pace with the advancement of the society, trust should be maintained. From my own perspective, trust is the key to our good relationship. We should maintain such an excellent quality, which can help to improve our own moral cultivation.