题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
No one can ignore the impact of good faith.As is known,good faith plays an indispensable role in our life.One who has a good personality are welcomed by the public.The majority of people who take it seriously pointed out that individual who has no good faith cannot succeed in doing everything. How can we keep trust from others?For one thing,if we want to win others' trust,we must manage ourselves perfectly.One who had a bad behavior cannot win the respect from others.For anther,communication is a way that connect us with others,which is essential to the foundation of trust.What's more,confession is reckoned as an access to forming trust. No matter what has been mentioned,the significant thing is that we must show respect to others which provides a platform for the form of trust.Meanwhile,care,love,listening also act as an effective complement to the development of trust.