单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
A busy day Today is so busy day.I am getting up at five o'clock and begin bush tooth wash face then joey my breakfast.well done.I am going to go to school.but I am wait bus so long time have my time very time sensitive.so I decide to run school.I feel very tired