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TV Commercials Always Mislead People Would you rather be suggested to buy a production which comes from TV commercials? And have you ever participated to a grope buying activity with you friends due to some TV commercials` introduction? If you were, you are misled by the merchant. One of my friends who is a beautiful girl, but she was confronted with the anguish of her face skin which had turned dark after doing an add job in a summer holiday. Because of bathing the sunshine for a long time on the work places, she lost her olive white, so she managed to find some ways of refreshing her prime beauty. She bought a cake of soap to wash her face at prime tense, because she was told by her friends who had used this type of soap and finally got good effect. But after a month, her face could not turn light. On day she watched TV and found a production which benefited to her situation. This was a facial cleaner which was introduction by a TV channel, was a TV commercial production. The announcer said that this production facilitates users` face become white in a short period and no after-effect after using it, it was extracted from the plant which maintains it natural. He also exaggerates the advantages to allure the customers who need to whiten their face. Due to this TV commercial, her heart was caught by this TV program, she called the customer service staff and bought a set of this production without hesitation. Several days later, she received a package. She started to use this production. But when she run out of it, it did not take any effect, she realized that she was misled by him and fell into the trap, she attended to call the customer service staff, but this number was no longer exist. She cried, she not only wasted of money but also wasted her invaluable time, she very regret for her irrational decision. From this example, we should not believe TV commercial readily, especially to buy something which can take affects to our bodies. On the one hand, we should treat the TV commercials rationally; on the other hand, we should not believe the TV commercials absolutely, because many TV commercials always mislead the customers.
