作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用学术词汇;复杂句采用很棒;全文结构较为严谨。
TV Commercials Always Mislead People Would you rather be suggested to buy a production which comes from TV commercials? And have you ever participated in a group buying activity with your friends due to some TV commercials` introduction? If you were, you are misled by the merchants. One of my friends who is a beautiful girl, but, she was confronted by the anguish of her face skin which had turned dark after doing an odd job in a summer holiday. Because of bathing the sunshine for a long time on the work places, she lost her olive white, so she managed to find some ways of refreshing her prime beauty. She bought a cake of soap to wash her face at prime tense, because she was told by her friends who had used this type of soap and finally got good effect. Nonetheless, after a month, her face could not turn right. On day, she watched TV and found a production which benefited to her situation. This was a facial cleaner which was the introduction by a TV channel, was a TV commercial production. The announcer said that this production facilitates users` face become white in a short period and no after-effect. It was extracted from plants which maintain their natural composition. He also exaggerates the advantages to allure customers who need to whiten their face quickly. Due to this TV commercial, her heart was caught by this TV program, she called the customer service staff to purchase a set of this production without hesitation. Several days later, she received a package and she started to use this production. But when she ran out of it, it did not take any effect on her face, she realized that she was misled and fell into the trap, she attended to call the customer service staff which she had called two months ago, but this number was no longer exist. She cried, it not only wasted her money but also wasted her invaluable time, she felt very regret for her irrational decision. From this example, we should not believe TV commercial readily, especially to buy something which can take effects to our bodies. On the one hand, we should treat the TV commercials rationally; on the other hand, we should not believe the TV commercials absolutely, because many TV commercials always mislead the customers.