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My dog I have a dog.My dog name is dudu .It is nine-year-old.He is very energy. It has a big eyes,a long ears,has a blonde clothes.It often run away in my house. When it is eating food ,it always happy to me.Every morning we are playing in the grasses .We are very happy.