2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the development of science and technology,computer has intruded our life.The majority of people give priority to the internet and inevitably neglected the importance of thinking themselves. There are many advantages and disadvantages on computer.For one thing,computer provides a platform for studying in various subjects and differ fields.For another,computer offers us more convenience to communicate with people from different parts of the world.Compared with the computer,individual also plays an indispensable role in our life.The god endows us with unique ability which adds color to the dull routine of daily life. Despite the fact that computer exerts tremendous effect on our life,human being can never be replaced.I'm inclined to take it for granted that computer has been applied to any field but I confirm that computer will not pose a great threat to our think.In the end,we should strike a balance between surfing on computer and thinking ourselves.Only in this way can we embrace a bright future and happy life.